Crazy hot

[tmanzano]

Beautiful edit.

One minor suggestion to consider (and this adds a different sort of nuance):

I do like it when he grows
Flowers in spring,

Not sure if you'll like the implication, but figured I'd post an option.

I like how tight this reads.

Best,

Todd

This has kept me up most of the night... I'm still unsettled by it. I am tempted by your suggestion here. It would change a nuance in this piece to a foundational stanza. This is a tough one Todd. Very well thought out suggestion here. This may take me a day or two... Leaning toward it.

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This post is crazy hot, ( great title,btw), love the edited version. Blown away by this superb writing.
Heart

A very enthusiastic thank you Heartfire. Incredibly humbled...