starry night (haiku)
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(03-23-2013, 12:59 PM)billy Wrote:  
(03-23-2013, 12:46 AM)Heartafire Wrote:  moonless night
pin-point stars
pierce the sea
i like it, should there be a seasonal word in there?
Hi Billy, thanks so much for stopping here. I imagine the use of seasonal words is optional now, it seems a lot of the traditional critieria has been abandoned in order to accommodate many languages. Here is an example of a haiku by Basho. I find many
exotic forms do not include a seasonal reference...but what do I know? Please take all info. with a grain of salt.
A wild sea-
In the distance over Sado
The Milky Way.
My best and thanks again,
Heart
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starry night (haiku) - by Heartafire - 03-23-2013, 12:46 AM
RE: starry night (haiku) - by softlyfalling - 03-23-2013, 04:01 AM
RE: starry night (haiku) - by billy - 03-23-2013, 12:59 PM
RE: starry night (haiku) - by Heartafire - 03-24-2013, 12:22 AM
RE: starry night (haiku) - by billy - 03-26-2013, 06:43 PM
RE: starry night (haiku) - by Heartafire - 03-26-2013, 11:51 PM
RE: starry night (haiku) - by milo - 03-31-2013, 05:46 AM
RE: starry night (haiku) - by billy - 04-01-2013, 10:10 AM
RE: starry night (haiku) - by lolo - 03-24-2013, 02:58 AM
RE: starry night (haiku) - by Todd - 03-26-2013, 06:15 PM
RE: starry night (haiku) - by Soaring Eagle - 03-31-2013, 03:22 AM
RE: starry night (haiku) - by trueenigma - 03-31-2013, 06:50 PM
RE: starry night (haiku) - by Heartafire - 04-01-2013, 09:12 AM
RE: starry night (haiku) - by serge gurkski - 04-01-2013, 09:24 AM
RE: starry night (haiku) - by Heartafire - 04-01-2013, 09:40 AM
RE: starry night (haiku) - by trueenigma - 04-01-2013, 11:00 AM
RE: starry night (haiku) - by serge gurkski - 04-01-2013, 10:06 AM
RE: starry night (haiku) - by Heartafire - 04-01-2013, 10:08 AM
RE: starry night (haiku) - by Heartafire - 04-01-2013, 10:18 AM
RE: starry night (haiku) - by billy - 04-01-2013, 11:10 AM
RE: starry night (haiku) - by trueenigma - 04-01-2013, 11:52 AM
RE: starry night (haiku) - by billy - 04-01-2013, 01:29 PM
RE: starry night (haiku) - by Heartafire - 04-01-2013, 01:56 PM
RE: starry night (haiku) - by billy - 04-01-2013, 03:21 PM
RE: starry night (haiku) - by serge gurkski - 04-01-2013, 10:25 AM
RE: starry night (haiku) - by Todd - 04-01-2013, 10:58 AM
RE: starry night (haiku) - by Todd - 04-01-2013, 12:50 PM
RE: starry night (haiku) - by Heartafire - 04-03-2013, 09:30 AM



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