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As the Clock Ticks
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03-23-2013, 10:31 PM
Thanks for the advice! I might just want to point out the meaning though. I am a Christian and God influences my writing a lot. There's occasionally a poem where I don't reference him, but this is not one. When I say "Him" that's who I am talking about (hence it being capitalized). I edited it and I think it looks a lot better now. Thanks again!
"Some day you will be old enough to start reading fairy tales again." - C.S. Lewis
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As the Clock Ticks - by C.M.C. - 03-23-2013, 03:13 PM
RE: As the Clock Ticks - by NakedBear - 03-23-2013, 05:22 PM
RE: As the Clock Ticks - by softlyfalling - 03-23-2013, 09:32 PM
RE: As the Clock Ticks - by C.M.C. - 03-23-2013, 10:31 PM
RE: As the Clock Ticks - by Todd - 03-24-2013, 12:03 AM
RE: As the Clock Ticks - by C.M.C. - 03-24-2013, 01:06 AM
RE: As the Clock Ticks - by Todd - 03-24-2013, 01:30 PM
RE: As the Clock Ticks - by smjafrulhassan - 03-24-2013, 03:03 PM
RE: As the Clock Ticks - by Todd - 03-24-2013, 08:34 PM
RE: As the Clock Ticks - by NakedBear - 03-24-2013, 04:36 PM
RE: As the Clock Ticks - by C.M.C. - 03-24-2013, 09:55 PM
RE: As the Clock Ticks - by tectak - 03-24-2013, 11:00 PM
RE: As the Clock Ticks - by C.M.C. - 03-25-2013, 01:58 AM
RE: As the Clock Ticks - by tectak - 03-25-2013, 02:47 AM
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