Bottled Up

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Hi NakedBear, it's good to have that word deemed acceptable and I have incorporated your comma position in revision thankyouuuu

Hi joshuacan, I'm thinking another line may not bring anything more to the table so to speak, and am really counting on the title to clarify further Bottled Up- blue bottles

Hi mariamuse, thanks- lucky it's not scratch and sniff heh

Hi justcloudy, I took your comments on board and yes , it was a tad obscure as my reason for capitalising, I wanted to bring out the unsavoury character in the piece after all you do not lie dead for days on on end without anyone wondering where you are , I hope by italicizing it I haven't lost any of it's meaning - so thankyou

Hi newsclippings- ah death, grisly yes, lovely muse though thankyou