Bottled Up

[NakedBear]

Cosseted
from the cold shouldn't there be a comma here?
and wrapt, if you do add a comma above, you could drop 'and' on this line. The problem with 'and' here is that it makes wrapping sound like its being done in addition to cosseting, when in fact it is the (manner of) cosseting. EDIT: edited comment for clarity.
her movable
blanket
added warmth,
lying-
Still, kicking
up a stink;
such a good friend?
I guess,
a million flies can’t be wrong.

This is very vivid and I enjoyed reading it.

Mikey.