03-23-2013, 01:13 PM
Beautiful edit.
One minor suggestion to consider (and this adds a different sort of nuance):
I do like it when he grows
Flowers in spring,
Not sure if you'll like the implication, but figured I'd post an option.
I like how tight this reads.
Best,
Todd
One minor suggestion to consider (and this adds a different sort of nuance):
I do like it when he grows
Flowers in spring,
Not sure if you'll like the implication, but figured I'd post an option.
I like how tight this reads.
Best,
Todd
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson