03-23-2013, 12:41 AM
(03-22-2013, 08:26 AM)saeity Wrote:Hi Saeity, I like this, the message. I love haiku/senryu and all the form controversy that comes with it. I prefer minimal wording. I might pare this to:He devours in one
bite, thoughtfully chews upon.
Throws up and spits out!
devoured
chewed up
spit out
a thought to be binned at will. Again, let me say how much I enjoyed this.
Heart

