Dandelion Woman
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Can you not relate to her, the wild Dandelion woman? The subtle alliteration you use here makes this poem sing to her. She does not conform; she is beautiful but her beauty is not defined by any earthly parameters; she is generous and her greatest gift is of herself. The middle stanza is my favorite part, though all is incredibly lovely and I cannot offer one tiny suggestion, except to say please never change a single word of it.
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Dandelion Woman - by Leanne - 03-22-2013, 05:31 AM
RE: Dandelion Woman - by softlyfalling - 03-22-2013, 05:50 AM
RE: Dandelion Woman - by milo - 03-22-2013, 05:52 AM
RE: Dandelion Woman - by Leanne - 03-22-2013, 05:56 AM
RE: Dandelion Woman - by milo - 03-22-2013, 07:37 AM
RE: Dandelion Woman - by Will Dockery - 03-28-2013, 10:27 PM
RE: Dandelion Woman - by Leanne - 03-22-2013, 08:03 AM
RE: Dandelion Woman - by milo - 03-22-2013, 10:33 AM
RE: Dandelion Woman - by Leanne - 03-22-2013, 11:28 AM



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