‘Eternal’, ‘love’, sneer!

‘Eternal’, ‘love’, sneer!

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03-22-2013, 01:04 AM

(03-22-2013, 12:02 AM)saeity Wrote: Well I did like this, it is a pleasure to the ear, but why have you left it a line short of a sonnet?

regards saeity.

Ack! Shit! I missed a line when typing this out (I do most of my work in pencil).

Thanks for pointing that out.

Shit.

Corrected.

Mikey.

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‘Eternal’, ‘love’, sneer! - by NakedBear - 03-21-2013, 02:18 PM

RE: ‘Eternal’, ‘love’, sneer! - by mariamuse - 03-21-2013, 03:35 PM

RE: ‘Eternal’, ‘love’, sneer! - by NakedBear - 03-23-2013, 03:29 PM

RE: ‘Eternal’, ‘love’, sneer! - by C.M.C. - 03-24-2013, 10:58 AM

RE: ‘Eternal’, ‘love’, sneer! - by NakedBear - 03-24-2013, 04:41 PM

RE: ‘Eternal’, ‘love’, sneer! - by saeity - 03-22-2013, 12:02 AM

RE: ‘Eternal’, ‘love’, sneer! - by NakedBear - 03-22-2013, 01:04 AM

RE: ‘Eternal’, ‘love’, sneer! - by C.M.C. - 03-23-2013, 03:05 PM

RE: ‘Eternal’, ‘love’, sneer! - by milo - 03-24-2013, 05:04 PM

RE: ‘Eternal’, ‘love’, sneer! - by NakedBear - 03-24-2013, 05:17 PM

RE: ‘Eternal’, ‘love’, sneer! - by softlyfalling - 03-24-2013, 11:38 PM

RE: ‘Eternal’, ‘love’, sneer! - by tectak - 03-25-2013, 12:31 AM

RE: ‘Eternal’, ‘love’, sneer! - by NakedBear - 03-25-2013, 02:20 PM

RE: ‘Eternal’, ‘love’, sneer! - by tectak - 03-25-2013, 08:49 PM

RE: ‘Eternal’, ‘love’, sneer! - by NakedBear - 03-26-2013, 02:38 PM

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