‘Eternal’, ‘love’, sneer!
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(03-22-2013, 12:02 AM)saeity Wrote:  Well I did like this, it is a pleasure to the ear, but why have you left it a line short of a sonnet?


regards saeity.
Ack! Shit! I missed a line when typing this out (I do most of my work in pencil).

Thanks for pointing that out.

Shit.

Corrected.

Mikey.
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Messages In This Thread
‘Eternal’, ‘love’, sneer! - by NakedBear - 03-21-2013, 02:18 PM
RE: ‘Eternal’, ‘love’, sneer! - by C.M.C. - 03-24-2013, 10:58 AM
RE: ‘Eternal’, ‘love’, sneer! - by saeity - 03-22-2013, 12:02 AM
RE: ‘Eternal’, ‘love’, sneer! - by NakedBear - 03-22-2013, 01:04 AM
RE: ‘Eternal’, ‘love’, sneer! - by C.M.C. - 03-23-2013, 03:05 PM
RE: ‘Eternal’, ‘love’, sneer! - by milo - 03-24-2013, 05:04 PM
RE: ‘Eternal’, ‘love’, sneer! - by tectak - 03-25-2013, 12:31 AM
RE: ‘Eternal’, ‘love’, sneer! - by tectak - 03-25-2013, 08:49 PM



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