The fray

The fray

rowens
Unregistered

03-21-2013, 10:09 PM

The scene moves in flashes, and that seems ok to me.

"Indictment and judgement in consecution." That and the last line hold things together. Though sometimes I don't like lines like that.

And those two words aren't spelled wrong.

« Next Oldest | Next Newest »

Messages In This Thread

The fray - by Crepuscule - 03-21-2013, 08:01 AM

RE: The fray - by mariamuse - 03-21-2013, 03:56 PM

RE: The fray - by Mattie - 03-21-2013, 08:08 PM

RE: The fray - by tectak - 03-24-2013, 10:00 PM

RE: The fray - by newsclippings - 03-21-2013, 08:27 PM

RE: The fray - by rowens - 03-21-2013, 10:09 PM

RE: The fray - by Crepuscule - 03-21-2013, 10:10 PM

RE: The fray - by newsclippings - 03-23-2013, 04:04 AM

RE: The fray - by DoReMi - 03-23-2013, 09:47 PM

RE: The fray - by Crepuscule - 03-24-2013, 08:00 AM

RE: The fray - by Leanne - 03-24-2013, 09:24 AM

View a Printable Version
Subscribe to this thread

Users browsing this thread: 1 Guest(s)

Login
Username:
Password:	Lost Password?
	Remember me