03-21-2013, 03:56 PM
I've never heard the word consecution before, but I know what it means, and I like it.
I like the images, they are strong and evocative. I do find myself wishing instead for somethings more in the content, a point of view, a judgment beyond narrative. There was a fight, and I wish the observer here would just get a little but dirty and tell us why. But maybe that's the point of the last line- he won't, he'll just walk by. That's fine too.
I like the images, they are strong and evocative. I do find myself wishing instead for somethings more in the content, a point of view, a judgment beyond narrative. There was a fight, and I wish the observer here would just get a little but dirty and tell us why. But maybe that's the point of the last line- he won't, he'll just walk by. That's fine too.