Oblivion

[softlyfalling]

joshuacan:

"Some ideas for the last lines (feel free to disregard, use etc):
1. The coldest embrace of the darkness, I am gripped by loneliness.
2. Trapped within infinite darkness, I tremble in my sleep.
3. Alone in indifferent darkness, I tremble in fetal position."

Thank you, thank you, thank you!!! Somehow these ideas freed my frozen mind... see what you think of the edit, please