Bottled Up

Bottled Up

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03-21-2013, 08:15 AM

(03-21-2013, 04:02 AM)saeity Wrote: Cosseted
from the cold
and wrapt,
her movable
blanket
added warmth,
lying-
Still, kicking
up a stink;
such a good friend?
I guess,
a million flies can’t be wrong.

It's difficult to understand. Are the flies the blanket? I think it loses much of the power it might have in ambiguity, but I'm intrigued. Is it about decay?

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Bottled Up - by saeity - 03-21-2013, 04:02 AM

RE: Bottled Up - by Bloggsworth - 03-21-2013, 04:55 AM

RE: Bottled Up - by saeity - 03-21-2013, 09:09 AM

RE: Bottled Up - by Crepuscule - 03-21-2013, 08:15 AM

RE: Bottled Up - by NakedBear - 03-21-2013, 09:27 AM

RE: Bottled Up - by joshuacan - 03-21-2013, 01:35 PM

RE: Bottled Up - by mariamuse - 03-21-2013, 03:42 PM

RE: Bottled Up - by justcloudy - 03-21-2013, 06:25 PM

RE: Bottled Up - by newsclippings - 03-21-2013, 08:37 PM

RE: Bottled Up - by NakedBear - 03-23-2013, 03:58 PM

RE: Bottled Up - by saeity - 03-23-2013, 10:24 PM

RE: Bottled Up - by tectak - 03-24-2013, 09:53 PM

RE: Bottled Up - by saeity - 03-26-2013, 08:23 PM

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