Bottled Up

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Edit 2

Cosseted
from the cold,
wrapt;
her movable
blanket
added warmth.
Lying
still, kicking
up a stink;
such a good friend?
I guess
a million flies can’t be wrong.


Edit 1

Cosseted
from the cold,
wrapt,
her movable
blanket
added warmth,
lying-
still, kicking
up a stink;
such a good friend?
I guess,
a million flies can’t be wrong.

ORIGINAL:

Cosseted
from the cold
and wrapt,
her movable
blanket
added warmth,
lying,
Still, kicking
up a stink;
such a good friend?
I guess,
a million flies can’t be wrong.