03-21-2013, 12:55 AM
The edits really are excellent. It shifts the syntax up to a whole new, higher, more literary level. I love words, loved to find them used well, with sensitivity to nuances of connotation and a skill that sometimes I think is inherent and inborn in a few gifted poets. Never surrender your preferences, they define the style that your soul issues. I love rhyme, adore it when it is graceful and eloquent. I will NEVER give it up, not entirely.
I also admire the courteous way you stand up for yourself. (Certain people are quite rude, i agree) Gentle righteousness takes a mortal woman and makes her a goddess warrior!
Hideous? Only in your mind. Even the first draft was good, albeit dangerously close to falling from pure poetical grace onto the Earth.
I also admire the courteous way you stand up for yourself. (Certain people are quite rude, i agree) Gentle righteousness takes a mortal woman and makes her a goddess warrior!
Hideous? Only in your mind. Even the first draft was good, albeit dangerously close to falling from pure poetical grace onto the Earth.