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Hi! I read this as a rant, the lack of punctuation and words seeming to trip over one another lend it a jarring quality, the repetition emphasing the message. I enjoyed it.
Cheers,
Heart
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< a wonderful life > - by rayheinrich - 03-19-2013, 09:10 PM
RE: < a wonderful life > - by newsclippings - 03-20-2013, 09:18 PM
RE: < a wonderful life > - by Heartafire - 03-20-2013, 11:55 PM



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