Chances
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(03-20-2013, 05:52 PM)Bloggsworth Wrote:  


--------Chances

--------It was one of those things
--------I should have practised;
--------like changing gear
--------without using the clutch,
--------riding a bike with no hands,
--------falling in love with no thought
--------for the consequences.


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What was one of those things?
Correct semi colon use maybe? I have to say, for me, nothing about this really works, the sentence fragment, the incorrect punctuation, the title.

milo
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Messages In This Thread
Chances - by Bloggsworth - 03-20-2013, 05:52 PM
RE: Chances - by milo - 03-20-2013, 07:51 PM
RE: Chances - by justcloudy - 03-20-2013, 08:02 PM
RE: Chances - by newsclippings - 03-20-2013, 08:09 PM
RE: Chances - by tectak - 03-20-2013, 09:00 PM



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