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03-20-2013, 01:35 AM
Wow, I'm not in a position to critique it's form or anything, but I absolutely loved this poem. It took me by surprise, and i love the change of tone here:
"I slap my face with water Bite my arms and pull glass From my forehead Because it's summer In my bathroom mirror" Wonderful. |
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RE: Crazy hot - by Todd - 03-18-2013, 06:01 PM
RE: Crazy hot - by tmanzano - 03-18-2013, 10:58 PM
RE: Crazy hot - by Todd - 03-18-2013, 11:00 PM
RE: Crazy hot - by tmanzano - 03-19-2013, 12:54 AM
RE: Crazy hot - by softlyfalling - 03-19-2013, 01:09 AM
RE: Crazy hot - by tmanzano - 03-19-2013, 02:22 AM
RE: Crazy hot - by Todd - 03-19-2013, 02:29 AM
RE: Crazy hot - by tmanzano - 03-19-2013, 07:43 AM
RE: Crazy hot - by Heartafire - 03-19-2013, 08:31 AM
RE: Crazy hot - by Medusa - 03-20-2013, 01:35 AM
RE: Crazy hot - by justcloudy - 03-22-2013, 12:09 AM
RE: Crazy hot - by tmanzano - 03-22-2013, 08:07 AM
RE: Crazy hot - by tmanzano - 03-23-2013, 12:37 PM
RE: Crazy hot - by Todd - 03-23-2013, 01:13 PM
RE: Crazy hot - by tmanzano - 03-24-2013, 02:07 AM
RE: Crazy hot - by Heartafire - 03-24-2013, 12:11 AM
RE: Crazy hot - by Todd - 03-24-2013, 03:06 AM
RE: Crazy hot - by lolo - 03-24-2013, 03:19 AM
RE: Crazy hot - by tmanzano - 03-25-2013, 04:42 AM
RE: Crazy hot - by Todd - 03-25-2013, 05:42 AM
RE: Crazy hot - by tmanzano - 04-22-2021, 01:55 AM
RE: Crazy hot - by Knot - 04-22-2021, 02:58 AM
RE: Crazy hot - by tmanzano - 04-22-2021, 04:13 AM
RE: Crazy hot - by TranquillityBase - 04-22-2021, 06:29 AM
RE: Crazy hot - by tmanzano - 04-22-2021, 06:41 AM
RE: Crazy hot - by Knot - 04-22-2021, 08:46 PM
RE: Crazy hot - by tmanzano - 04-23-2021, 05:03 AM
RE: Crazy hot - by TranquillityBase - 04-22-2021, 09:28 PM
RE: Crazy hot - by Mark A Becker - 04-22-2021, 11:30 PM
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