Sun Come Shine
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Thankyou Abu for your detailed response i have revised and shortened the lines in question, as for the speaker 'knowing' of a significant others infidelity often tends to render them cold and empty - once again thankyou.

saeity.
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Sun Come Shine - by saeity - 03-18-2013, 08:55 AM
RE: Sun Come Shine - by abu nuwas - 03-18-2013, 08:11 PM
RE: Sun Come Shine - by saeity - 03-19-2013, 07:49 AM



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