Simon in the Land of Chalk Outlines

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Simon in the Land of Chalk Outlines

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03-19-2013, 04:51 AM

You could also do with a comma at the end of the second last line.

It could be worse

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Simon in the Land of Chalk Outlines - by Todd - 03-19-2013, 04:24 AM

RE: Simon in the Land of Chalk Outlines - by Leanne - 03-19-2013, 04:31 AM

RE: Simon in the Land of Chalk Outlines - by Todd - 03-19-2013, 04:41 AM

RE: Simon in the Land of Chalk Outlines - by Leanne - 03-19-2013, 04:45 AM

RE: Simon in the Land of Chalk Outlines - by Todd - 03-19-2013, 04:47 AM

RE: Simon in the Land of Chalk Outlines - by Leanne - 03-19-2013, 04:51 AM

RE: Simon in the Land of Chalk Outlines - by Todd - 03-19-2013, 04:55 AM

RE: Simon in the Land of Chalk Outlines - by milo - 03-19-2013, 05:37 AM

RE: Simon in the Land of Chalk Outlines - by tectak - 03-19-2013, 09:14 AM

RE: Simon in the Land of Chalk Outlines - by Todd - 03-19-2013, 05:58 AM

RE: Simon in the Land of Chalk Outlines - by Todd - 03-19-2013, 10:40 AM

RE: Simon in the Land of Chalk Outlines - by milo - 03-19-2013, 11:45 AM

RE: Simon in the Land of Chalk Outlines - by Todd - 03-19-2013, 11:57 AM

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