03-18-2013, 11:06 PM
softlyfalling, glad you could relate to the poem. =]
Todd, thanks for the suggestions. I agree with your thoughts on the first stanza, and the nighttime mask idea... I'll play around and see what I can do. and actually I originally had line 14 as
"unpure browns and sorry greys" but
"unpure, sorry browns and greys" just somehow seemed to flow better.
thanks both.
Todd, thanks for the suggestions. I agree with your thoughts on the first stanza, and the nighttime mask idea... I'll play around and see what I can do. and actually I originally had line 14 as
"unpure browns and sorry greys" but
"unpure, sorry browns and greys" just somehow seemed to flow better.
thanks both.
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The howling beast is back.
The howling beast is back.