The man and the whale
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Typos happen, no matter what we do.

In my opinion: remove fuzzy.

But that's again just my take. For me, the adjective weakens the phrasing.
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson
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The man and the whale - by Carile - 03-18-2013, 10:25 AM
RE: The man and the whale - by Todd - 03-18-2013, 11:33 AM
RE: The man and the whale - by Carile - 03-18-2013, 07:01 PM
RE: The man and the whale - by Todd - 03-18-2013, 07:08 PM
RE: The man and the whale - by newsclippings - 03-18-2013, 07:11 PM



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