Dead before death. (Edit 2)

Dead before death. (Edit 2)

cidermaid Offline

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#11

03-17-2013, 06:25 PM

I have done a re-write of the first stanza. Which was undeniably hideous in my eyes. I have given up for now on my intent to renounce all rhyme...I just can't do it I need to go on a steps programme or such like. Confused

@ tectak. Once more into your lair Mr Tectak...or is it Mr Tec-a-také of the assassins’ guild today?

@ Milo Whilst your comments did have some merit, a hand shake or pleasant greeting would not have been amiss to introduce yourself for a first post. Why so rough and rude to shake the darling buds of creativity?

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Dead before death. (Edit 2) - by cidermaid - 03-13-2013, 11:44 PM

RE: Dead before death. - by tectak - 03-14-2013, 08:27 AM

RE: Dead before death. - by cidermaid - 03-14-2013, 04:57 PM

RE: Dead before death. - by cidermaid - 03-15-2013, 03:20 AM

RE: Dead before death. - by Mattie - 03-15-2013, 03:51 AM

RE: Dead before death. - by Keith - 03-15-2013, 08:22 AM

RE: Dead before death. - by NakedBear - 03-15-2013, 03:49 PM

RE: Dead before death. - by tectak - 03-15-2013, 07:29 PM

RE: Dead before death. - by cidermaid - 03-16-2013, 05:29 AM

RE: Dead before death. - by milo - 03-16-2013, 06:42 PM