What’s wrong with poetry?

[shemthepenman]

ok, so here is a request, write something structured, well, and with punctuation perfect… post it in serious. I would ask Picasso the same. I suppose the problem is, you write such poor poetry (and all get drawn into the problem of poetry) that no one can comment on your style, technic, or anything… show me you can write poetry. then I’ll take your more experimental poetry more seriously.