03-17-2013, 01:35 AM
wow, a delicious ode!
loved it!, Here what I would change in the last stanza
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Change not,
stay like this forever
Remind us of a summer
and remain in delight
loved it!, Here what I would change in the last stanza
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Change not,
stay like this forever
Remind us of a summer
and remain in delight