03-16-2013, 08:02 PM
Hi Brother Swey, welcome to the site! Two quick things: Before you post in Serious you have to do an appropriate critique in the forum. You're also supposed to post only one poem per day in the critique forums. I'll move this to miscellaneous right now. Once you've done your critique in Serious, let me know and I'll move it back.
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson