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03-15-2013, 11:33 PM

(03-09-2013, 10:01 AM)Tommy Wrote: I enjoyed it. I like that you are playing with verbs to describe emotion but you kind of lost me after the because's. I don't think you got honest with me until the 3rd stanza.

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Because - by Aphroditeny - 03-09-2013, 03:15 AM

RE: Because - by saeity - 03-09-2013, 05:41 AM

RE: Because - by cidermaid - 03-09-2013, 07:04 AM

RE: Because - by Aphroditeny - 03-09-2013, 08:41 AM

RE: Because - by Tommy - 03-09-2013, 10:01 AM

RE: Because - by Aphroditeny - 03-15-2013, 11:33 PM

RE: Because - by Jae Mc Donnell - 03-16-2013, 01:52 AM

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