03-14-2013, 06:37 PM
This, too, shall pass.
I love that line, because it is so true and such comfort in situations of heartbreak. I like this poem, I understand the message completely. I personally find the word 'unflinching' confusing in an otherwise clear line. Good job overall.
I love that line, because it is so true and such comfort in situations of heartbreak. I like this poem, I understand the message completely. I personally find the word 'unflinching' confusing in an otherwise clear line. Good job overall.