Too White To Fit In With The Rednecks
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I just love this, not sure how you could improve it with an edit but as a few others have suggested it could maybe be bettered with a bit of tweaking I'll wait and see what you decide,look forward to the bastard poems to come if this is the start
enjoyed muchly
never make someone your priority when to them you are only an option
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Too White To Fit In With The Rednecks - by rowens - 03-11-2013, 01:08 AM
RE: Too White To Fit In With The Rednecks - by rowens - 03-11-2013, 10:02 PM
RE: Too White To Fit In With The Rednecks - by Smiffy - 03-14-2013, 03:42 AM



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