I am.

[Jamie]

Some brilliant lines in this. I thought it read well with a sense of flow. "only alive at night like dreams that flee at dawns first light" love this line and this one"It's not the house or the accounts that make you a king; but the revolutions and revelations you bring."and"til the reaper comes and lays you to rest."and"til the reaper comes and lays you to rest." A few cliches but hey, my poems are a list of cliches.