03-12-2013, 06:52 AM
HI all, I'm new here and not sure if I'm posting this in the right place... would like to know if you could tell how this poem sound to you? It's a translation from a poem in Spanish:
Child of Darkness
Darkness of parks and stays creates heroes
If they open eyelids of the fog
as green wings in the shadow of the bushes.
Heroes, illusions, which may not cross the night,
but they help cross it when it is shameful
of lips caressing on the mirrors.
The hero who stabbed the darkness
emerged from a rainy air,
covered in sparks by the fireworks,
and, going deep into dreams of glass,
it soaked their flesh and dress.
Illusion and conviction merge together
riding on golden steeds of spells and joy
far from the sea, where all was light
reflecting the jasmine we scattered
revealing the dawn.
thnks a lot!!!
Child of Darkness
Darkness of parks and stays creates heroes
If they open eyelids of the fog
as green wings in the shadow of the bushes.
Heroes, illusions, which may not cross the night,
but they help cross it when it is shameful
of lips caressing on the mirrors.
The hero who stabbed the darkness
emerged from a rainy air,
covered in sparks by the fireworks,
and, going deep into dreams of glass,
it soaked their flesh and dress.
Illusion and conviction merge together
riding on golden steeds of spells and joy
far from the sea, where all was light
reflecting the jasmine we scattered
revealing the dawn.
thnks a lot!!!