03-11-2013, 10:12 PM
I agree with the previous comments. I also recently just joined, so my criticism may not be the most technical, but I'll do what I can 
Your poem provides great use of imagery; I feel that it lets the reader connect well to the theme of it. I like what you have written, perhaps a couple edits and it could be a great work 
Your poem provides great use of imagery; I feel that it lets the reader connect well to the theme of it. I like what you have written, perhaps a couple edits and it could be a great work