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[billy]

is there a place for works that don't use all the rules of writting,grammar.ect..can a piece be defined by it's content

yes,alloverthesite.
thing is, this is in serious critique. the lack of space after a comma brings this reader and another reader up short. it stops us from concentrating on the content. a piece is usually defined by it's content, part of that is how it's displayed. feel free to use whatever gramma you choose but defending it is sort of defending the indefensible. we see, we comment on it.

many poems here don't use grammar or uses it in odd ways. if someone doesn't think it adds to the poem they say as much.

i think it takes something away from your content. considering the brevity of the piece i'd say it's a large percent that being removed

as too the content minus grammar; it has a feel to it that borders near the edge of emo poetry. sorry emo's.... the one good line in it is warm comforting let. i like it because it works on more that one level.
the first line is the poem and because of that the rest doesnt matter. others will see it differently i'm sure.
thanks for the read.