03-11-2013, 10:33 AM
Hi mrfurly, quite an insight into a certain place at a bad time, and i like the 'up yours' feeling to tie it up. Overall a good piece having not written for ages
I wouldn't generally do this because I consider it quite rude, but...
Instead of writing 'I'm not that thing' write 'I'm not what you needed.' It sounds more like how we talk on an everyday basis.
Never consider you talk the same as the next person, to assume is to make an ASS out of U and ME
saeity.

I wouldn't generally do this because I consider it quite rude, but...
Instead of writing 'I'm not that thing' write 'I'm not what you needed.' It sounds more like how we talk on an everyday basis.
Never consider you talk the same as the next person, to assume is to make an ASS out of U and ME
saeity.


