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[tectak]

brevity is not somethink that works on here maybie..but every poem subject has been covered befor and to me other people writtings is personnel to them regardless of the subject matter..

Hi escorial.
I am not convinced yet of your true identity. Your poetry reminds me of Les Dawson playing piano badly...to play it thus one needs to be able to play it well: and he could.
Judgement and crit are reserved temporarily whilst I decide whether you are an inverse charlatan. To conceptualise as fluently as in your comment above would indicate a degree of understanding of the read word way out of proportion to your almost computerised failure to write fluently. It don't gel so it ain't aspic
We shall see. Are you Clive Anderson or Julie Birchil?
but not
Best, really,
tectak