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A First
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03-11-2013, 09:46 AM
Instead of writing 'I'm not that thing' write 'I'm not what you needed.' It sounds more like how we talk on an everyday basis. The talk about the 'fat' kid is offensive to some. Instead of that: The last picked in gym class? but edit that any way you want. Me writing poetry is a sight, too!
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A First - by mrfurly - 03-10-2013, 02:43 AM
RE: A First - by NakedBear - 03-10-2013, 05:52 AM
RE: A First - by mrfurly - 03-10-2013, 06:55 AM
RE: A First - by Michelle311 - 03-11-2013, 01:15 AM
RE: A First - by Claire - 03-11-2013, 09:46 AM
RE: A First - by saeity - 03-11-2013, 10:33 AM
RE: A First - by escorial - 03-12-2013, 12:23 AM
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