03-11-2013, 07:26 AM
[I must confess I felt like an old woman at the end of this, thought, 'oh don't do that.']
anyhow, it is simple and painful; I am not where it’s at on self-harm, and assume there are a million people writing similar things and relating to this on a whole different level than me.
So, apart from content, is there a reason you didn’t separate the clauses from the commas? I can’t see why. If there is a reason then cool, if not maybe consider revising.
anyhow, it is simple and painful; I am not where it’s at on self-harm, and assume there are a million people writing similar things and relating to this on a whole different level than me.
So, apart from content, is there a reason you didn’t separate the clauses from the commas? I can’t see why. If there is a reason then cool, if not maybe consider revising.