One in a Million
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I think this is where you post a poem?
I am writing a poem and I'm not sure how to improve it, though I know it can be improved. Please help but be nice(:


One in a Million

I want to say
a million words
to you.

Instead,
I stop the list at
one.

I am down to
a single word,
hoping you will
say the same.

If I could tell you
what has always been
on my mind,
maybe this wouldn’t be so hard.

Maybe, I would be
speaking to you
right now.

Maybe, there would be
no wonder of what to say or
what to feel.

Please listen,
please care.

For what I am about to say,
took me time to realize
I can.

It is not much,
just one word,
but it is the courage
I worked to gain.

This is what
I never thought
I would do.

I dare myself to walk
toward you,
so unpredictable.

Butterflies take flight
as I look into your
eyes.

I wish I could
turn around,
forget about all this,
but I am
already standing
in front of you.

I want to say
a million words
to you.

Instead,
I stop the list at
one.


I am down to
a single word,
hoping you will
say the same.

You smile
at me
as I look
at you.

I hold my breath and
tell you
the only word I can,
the word that starts all this: “Hello.”
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Messages In This Thread
One in a Million - by Claire - 03-11-2013, 05:10 AM
RE: One in a Million - by Leanne - 03-11-2013, 05:20 AM
RE: One in a Million - by Todd - 03-11-2013, 06:01 AM
RE: One in a Million - by escorial - 03-12-2013, 01:44 AM
RE: One in a Million - by billy - 03-12-2013, 02:01 AM
RE: One in a Million - by liampoetry - 03-12-2013, 02:48 AM



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