03-11-2013, 05:10 AM
I think this is where you post a poem?
I am writing a poem and I'm not sure how to improve it, though I know it can be improved. Please help but be nice(:
One in a Million
I want to say
a million words
to you.
Instead,
I stop the list at
one.
I am down to
a single word,
hoping you will
say the same.
If I could tell you
what has always been
on my mind,
maybe this wouldn’t be so hard.
Maybe, I would be
speaking to you
right now.
Maybe, there would be
no wonder of what to say or
what to feel.
Please listen,
please care.
For what I am about to say,
took me time to realize
I can.
It is not much,
just one word,
but it is the courage
I worked to gain.
This is what
I never thought
I would do.
I dare myself to walk
toward you,
so unpredictable.
Butterflies take flight
as I look into your
eyes.
I wish I could
turn around,
forget about all this,
but I am
already standing
in front of you.
I want to say
a million words
to you.
Instead,
I stop the list at
one.
I am down to
a single word,
hoping you will
say the same.
You smile
at me
as I look
at you.
I hold my breath and
tell you
the only word I can,
the word that starts all this: “Hello.”
I am writing a poem and I'm not sure how to improve it, though I know it can be improved. Please help but be nice(:
One in a Million
I want to say
a million words
to you.
Instead,
I stop the list at
one.
I am down to
a single word,
hoping you will
say the same.
If I could tell you
what has always been
on my mind,
maybe this wouldn’t be so hard.
Maybe, I would be
speaking to you
right now.
Maybe, there would be
no wonder of what to say or
what to feel.
Please listen,
please care.
For what I am about to say,
took me time to realize
I can.
It is not much,
just one word,
but it is the courage
I worked to gain.
This is what
I never thought
I would do.
I dare myself to walk
toward you,
so unpredictable.
Butterflies take flight
as I look into your
eyes.
I wish I could
turn around,
forget about all this,
but I am
already standing
in front of you.
I want to say
a million words
to you.
Instead,
I stop the list at
one.
I am down to
a single word,
hoping you will
say the same.
You smile
at me
as I look
at you.
I hold my breath and
tell you
the only word I can,
the word that starts all this: “Hello.”