03-11-2013, 02:58 AM
Hello,
The message of this poem is strong but it is a little hard to read because the meter is strange. The rhythm of the poem is not uniform, nor is it slowly paced in a way that makes it comfortable to read. I just had kind of a hard time getting through it because it was so uneven in pace.
Good luck getting it to a place you love.
The message of this poem is strong but it is a little hard to read because the meter is strange. The rhythm of the poem is not uniform, nor is it slowly paced in a way that makes it comfortable to read. I just had kind of a hard time getting through it because it was so uneven in pace.
Good luck getting it to a place you love.