Prostituting for Beginners Edit 1, professional advice from leanne

[tectak]

I disagree, Serge -- it's poems like this that invite one to express audible bowel movements. However, M. le Tak is fortunate in that the doctors do not recommend euthanasia just yet. This poem may yet be rescued with judicious mouth-to-- well, somewhere -- rescuscitation.

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I tend to prefer the original end line... especially since it follows all those loud demands for attention. You do build a good crescendo.

Borborygmi! I only whipped it out because I thought you'd had enough! You want me to put it back in again? Bloody uppity oz women...dontcha love'em!