03-10-2013, 04:43 AM
Bolan eh? I don't think I've listened to T-Rex except accidentally for about 20 years! It could well be though, stuck in the dim recesses of the mind... although it sounds a bit more Syd Barrett to me 
I'm actually tempted to just get rid of that entire third strophe. Personally, I really don't like the mockingbird mime or the crystal decanter and maybe they'd be better saved for another poem since I can't work out a way to introduce them that seems satisfactory.
Is it "savage" that's a problem in the first?
It's not even breakfast and I think I need whisky for this. Slainte!
I'm actually tempted to just get rid of that entire third strophe. Personally, I really don't like the mockingbird mime or the crystal decanter and maybe they'd be better saved for another poem since I can't work out a way to introduce them that seems satisfactory.
Is it "savage" that's a problem in the first?
It's not even breakfast and I think I need whisky for this. Slainte!
It could be worse