New hope

New hope

Jamie

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Joined: Mar 2013

03-09-2013, 06:24 PM

Hi all, thanks for your comments. When I joined this forum a couple of days ago I thought I was ready to start on my third poem. I now know that I'm not. Your comments have given me much to think about and work on. I will post a second edit soon and if any of you would care to comment on it I will be grateful. Thanks again, your feedback is very valuable. This site is a great resource.

Jamie

Take my comments with a pinch of salt
I have no knowledge about a lot.

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New hope - by Jamie - 03-08-2013, 09:48 PM

RE: New hope - by billy - 03-08-2013, 10:54 PM

RE: New hope - by Todd - 03-08-2013, 11:16 PM

RE: New hope - by Tommy - 03-09-2013, 10:25 AM

RE: New hope - by Aphroditeny - 03-09-2013, 10:47 AM

RE: New hope - by Jamie - 03-09-2013, 06:24 PM

RE: New hope - by billy - 03-09-2013, 06:35 PM

RE: New hope - by Claire - 03-11-2013, 05:22 AM

RE: New hope - by Seth31 - 03-11-2013, 10:12 PM

RE: New hope - by escorial - 03-12-2013, 12:25 AM

RE: New hope - by milemke08 - 03-13-2013, 04:29 AM

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