03-09-2013, 06:02 AM
Hi escorial, I am really liking this
my only crit apart from the lack of punctuation, in which you leave us pondering as to what's intentional would be that i'd like to see the continuation of dialect
me garandad was a miner- love this, could visualize someone from oop north.
Thanks for the read
saeity.
my only crit apart from the lack of punctuation, in which you leave us pondering as to what's intentional would be that i'd like to see the continuation of dialect me garandad was a miner- love this, could visualize someone from oop north.
Thanks for the readsaeity.


