03-08-2013, 09:29 AM
I like it - maybe only becuzz I got it a bitsy more than HIM. ;-)
I agree with some minor pints Tom felt the unneccessary need to spill over you the poet.
It wouldn't be me would I not like this line best:
"intimately, infinitely, liltingly onwards,"
and: "foreverly larger than the titans of our minds."
comes right next, being the second best.
I am not sure they don't qualify, these loverly
-ly words I have heard whispered to me
not on the streets and not by the Urban dictionary
but from lipstickedly sexy lips that orally pleased this freak
all over East from the Midwest. I 'll close now (that will be best).
@ Tom: Are you familiar with Cowboy poetry?
(no tic)
Your's devotishly
I agree with some minor pints Tom felt the unneccessary need to spill over you the poet.
It wouldn't be me would I not like this line best:
"intimately, infinitely, liltingly onwards,"
and: "foreverly larger than the titans of our minds."
comes right next, being the second best.
I am not sure they don't qualify, these loverly
-ly words I have heard whispered to me
not on the streets and not by the Urban dictionary
but from lipstickedly sexy lips that orally pleased this freak
all over East from the Midwest. I 'll close now (that will be best).
@ Tom: Are you familiar with Cowboy poetry?
(no tic)
Your's devotishly
