03-07-2013, 09:09 AM
(03-07-2013, 02:39 AM)connorp123 Wrote: Sorry to disappoint but it's not about anyone else, just flaws in humanity and problems with my life at the time. I wrote this about a year ago when I was 15 and in a dark place, just trying to release some emotion. I thought I would post it in here to get some criticism but I guess I was looking for something different. This poem is riddled with symbolism that would be almost impossible for anyone else to understand so I apologize for you who tried to grasp the meaning. Thank you everyone for the feedback though.been there! ;-) One could still post it in order to get feedback on technical issues. But that is of course only for you to decide. as far as I am concerned, there is no need to apologize. Sometimes trying to solve riddles can be fun.
cheers
Serge