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Women understand that
while buying shoes is a necessity
wearing them is optional.

This is a poetry site of necessity. It is not an option. Read the rules.
tectak

If Hemmingway's

For sale
baby shoes
never worn

Is acceptable as a complete short story....

The women who have seen it acknowledge it as accurate!


Please elucidate - Seen from your lofty intellectual perch is it too short?

No. It is too long Sorry if I seemed a little blunt. That was not the intention....I need knocking off the lofty perch regularly.
I just feel that if there is little to crit you get little crit.
I know that you have stuck a few good crits up but billy HAS just changed the rules and I was taking advantage of them. When wrong....say wrong. I am wrong.
Best,
tectak