03-07-2013, 12:35 AM
You are not at all dull . My comment was tongue in cheek. But the Burns poem really exists. And if you check out my email address you will understand why I know it. ;-)
and now seriously this to the author: I'm all for aliteration orgies, but even I finf it a bit too much. I like the shout - whisper contrast- all in all I must confess it is too cryptic for me. And - oh wonder - agree with Tom: Here and there I find possible hints at the intended meaning:
I'll make one very bold guess: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Marc_Dutroux
because of this:
Belgian bakers beget bewitching bait,
and this:
Pricey papers persuade passionate players to participate,
and this:
The crazed man whispers eerily before attacking his next victim.
and especially that:
The dying child whispers a devastating “Help me” to her father.
The troubled teen whispers despicable comments before jumping.
Whispers kill.
and now seriously this to the author: I'm all for aliteration orgies, but even I finf it a bit too much. I like the shout - whisper contrast- all in all I must confess it is too cryptic for me. And - oh wonder - agree with Tom: Here and there I find possible hints at the intended meaning:
I'll make one very bold guess: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Marc_Dutroux
because of this:
Belgian bakers beget bewitching bait,
and this:
Pricey papers persuade passionate players to participate,
and this:
The crazed man whispers eerily before attacking his next victim.
and especially that:
The dying child whispers a devastating “Help me” to her father.
The troubled teen whispers despicable comments before jumping.
Whispers kill.
