Snow Angel

[serge gurkski]

wow Tom! ;-)

"without my becoming overwhelmingly rude. " sure! ;-)

"cuz" is poshest US street slang for because of course.

on to the poem:

The first stanza is not that bad (one nit: breath turns into gold?

But then, from stanza 2 onwards the potentially poetic quality deteriorates.

I wish I could say something nice to outbalance Tom's Tysonish frontal attack.

most of the lines are too obviously constructed for the sake of rhymes.

But a rewrite is always possible and I would use the first stanza as a forward operating base (to put it G.I-ish)

cheers serge

Hi serge,
Though flattered that I appear as a nom de célébrité in your signature, you are of course aware the La Rage is rabies, and you are therefore elevating yourself to the status of a mad dog!?
Best,
tectak

;-) But what else would I have expected from you? I'm nothing less but honored by your lovely dedication. Would it not be the same vice versa?

Need more Cognac to celebrate our dalliancing. You make me proud of me. Have fun! :-)

To quote my Guru:
"brake BREAK for fuck's sake." (That killed me. ;-))