Lie Dead (Edit 1 TOMH, italics by goldyfish)
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Lie Dead (Edit 1 TOMH, italics by goldyfish)
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03-06-2013, 06:33 AM
(03-05-2013, 08:24 PM)goldyfish Wrote: as a reader it seemed like it was the son talking until the last stanza, when the father speaks out. even with your explanation I'm still having a hard time seeing it another way. oops.How about if I italicise the opening line of the stanzas? Hm? Best, tectak |
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Lie Dead (Edit 1 TOMH, italics by goldyfish) - by tectak - 03-04-2013, 06:02 PM
RE: Lie Dead (Edit 1 TOMH) - by billy - 03-04-2013, 06:54 PM
RE: Lie Dead (Edit 1 TOMH) - by tectak - 03-05-2013, 01:45 AM
RE: Lie Dead (Edit 1 TOMH) - by billy - 03-05-2013, 01:55 AM
RE: Lie Dead (Edit 1 TOMH) - by justcloudy - 03-05-2013, 08:13 PM
RE: Lie Dead (Edit 1 TOMH) - by tectak - 03-05-2013, 08:21 PM
RE: Lie Dead (Edit 1 TOMH) - by justcloudy - 03-05-2013, 08:24 PM
RE: Lie Dead (Edit 1 TOMH) - by tectak - 03-06-2013, 06:33 AM
RE: Lie Dead (Edit 1 TOMH, italics by goldyfish) - by justcloudy - 03-07-2013, 06:59 PM
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