Lovely doll
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(02-28-2013, 07:48 PM)serge gurkski Wrote:  except for the very last word (which I find lame) I liked this. Not that that's not been said before, but - ya - you put it nicely. ,-)

very nicely.
Thank you for the comments and I've been really thinking a lot about the last word but this was the best one of them if you have any suggestions I would really appreciate your help

(02-28-2013, 05:01 AM)rowens Wrote:  This has potential. Something I want to look at again when I'm thinking right. The subject and the way you repeat things seem to be on to something. There are a few other things I want to say about this when my thoughts slow down a little.
Thank you. I hope you would have the time to share your opinion.
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Messages In This Thread
Lovely doll - by teddy864 - 02-21-2013, 05:09 AM
RE: Lovely doll - by rowens - 02-28-2013, 05:01 AM
RE: Lovely doll - by serge gurkski - 02-28-2013, 07:48 PM
RE: Lovely doll - by teddy864 - 03-06-2013, 01:23 AM
RE: Lovely doll - by rowens - 03-06-2013, 01:53 AM
RE: Lovely doll - by newsclippings - 03-06-2013, 05:11 AM



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